My scene improvements.

The scene I am in charge of is the Under the scene Dance off.

I like the story of this scene and the characters.To improve it i would sort out their spacing and ending.

Firstly i would make the two sides seaweed/houses go on diagonals instead of been comletely side on as the audience cant see it properly and we miss some of the dialogue within the scene. I would also spread them out a tad as they are quite squashed in the middle of the stage instead of using the entire space.

I would then sort out the ending becuase they dont show clearly how they win the competition, so we need to add a judge to announce it or something that makes it obvious they won instead of them just going yeah we won as soon as they get to the "competition". 

Maybe to add more to the scene we could make the children put hands up and say its a tie, then do a tie breaker in which they both dance at the same time to give a bigger finale before Sam finally deciding the winner. 

Overall I would just clean the scene up to make it more polished and add more dynamics to it becuase it has quite a good structure.