At the beginning I think that we need to add a song or something to emphasize the start of the piece so its more official for our target audience. I thought that the dynamics within the first dentist scene were effective and made the first scene come to life more which as a result draws the attention of the audience which is what we want to do. However when we do the sponge-bob song I feel that we should make the ending sharper to show the real contrast of when Grandad is controlling us/our imagination and when he isn't this also adds more dynamics and makes it more professional. When Grandad is choosing what the last pair do I thought that the macarana worked well so when we do it to make sure that it is a upbeat action to keep the piece entertaining it also adds elements of comedy which appeals to our target audience of 5, 6 and 7 year olds.
Within the football scene I liked how the audience members grouped at one side because it made it resemble a audience type of group more, although when Grandpa falls the group need to freeze quicker so all attention is on Grandad. Next is the space ship scene I think that the physical theater of the ship works well and really shows imagination enhancing our theme, anyhow I think that when we disperse into asteroids that we should do it a bit longer before we stagger off as I think that it happens to fast and may be confusing for our audience.
In the Frozen concert Timmy(Ash) needs to be more obvious when he is announcing/creating the different characters as I feel it is not clear enough and would then confuse our audience. To add to this we need to clean or change the transition to the realistic cave scene as it is messy and isn't well structured.After this is the misunderstood creature scene within this I just had personal improvements which were to try not to laugh at myself and keep in character throughout also to tone down my creature noises when Megan is talking so that what she is saying is clearer,the rest of this scene i thought ran well.
The next scene was the gorilla Island scene, I felt that this scene went okay however was a bit chaotic as people were confused with cues and who was doing what, to improve this we need to make clear who is turning into gorillas and on what the exact cues are this will make the comedy elements in the scene more effective and obvious. Within the Fairy scene the only things i felt needed improving was to elongate the I do believe in Fairies part as it was quite rushed and I felt that we could make more of it and the audience participation as it appeals to our target audience.
The start of Pirate section was good as the physical theater movements worked effectively really adding imagery to the piece making it more fun for the target audience, the characterization was also quite good within the Pirate scene, however we need a more specific cue to freeze when Timmy leaves the pirate ship as everyone freezes at different times and its quite messy. In the under the sea scene they just needed to sort out spacing as they were quite closed off to the audience and if they cant see out target audience will lose interest or start talking as they are younger and have short attention spans, to add to this they also just need to make it more official that they win the competition and who announces it. The Mermaid scene was good but The mermaids just need come further down stage as their dialogue is key to the story line and is lost when they are that far back, the only other thing for this section was that the octopus needs to calm down when the mermaids are talking otherwise it distracts the attention away from the mermaids.
The beginning of the Gnome scene was effective as it was quite funny which will appeal to the target audience, we just need to sort out what questions we are going to ask Timmy so that we don't take too much time or blank also need to make the props for the gnomes but mime also works for the scene.
Lastly we just need to improve the transition back into the dentist scene as it is messy and confusing and we don't want to lose it right at the end, the poem at the end is good as it ties it all together as well as being fun which appeals to our young target audience and then the final position is effective as it signifies the ending making it clear we are at the end.
In the Frozen concert Timmy(Ash) needs to be more obvious when he is announcing/creating the different characters as I feel it is not clear enough and would then confuse our audience. To add to this we need to clean or change the transition to the realistic cave scene as it is messy and isn't well structured.After this is the misunderstood creature scene within this I just had personal improvements which were to try not to laugh at myself and keep in character throughout also to tone down my creature noises when Megan is talking so that what she is saying is clearer,the rest of this scene i thought ran well.
The next scene was the gorilla Island scene, I felt that this scene went okay however was a bit chaotic as people were confused with cues and who was doing what, to improve this we need to make clear who is turning into gorillas and on what the exact cues are this will make the comedy elements in the scene more effective and obvious. Within the Fairy scene the only things i felt needed improving was to elongate the I do believe in Fairies part as it was quite rushed and I felt that we could make more of it and the audience participation as it appeals to our target audience.
The start of Pirate section was good as the physical theater movements worked effectively really adding imagery to the piece making it more fun for the target audience, the characterization was also quite good within the Pirate scene, however we need a more specific cue to freeze when Timmy leaves the pirate ship as everyone freezes at different times and its quite messy. In the under the sea scene they just needed to sort out spacing as they were quite closed off to the audience and if they cant see out target audience will lose interest or start talking as they are younger and have short attention spans, to add to this they also just need to make it more official that they win the competition and who announces it. The Mermaid scene was good but The mermaids just need come further down stage as their dialogue is key to the story line and is lost when they are that far back, the only other thing for this section was that the octopus needs to calm down when the mermaids are talking otherwise it distracts the attention away from the mermaids.
The beginning of the Gnome scene was effective as it was quite funny which will appeal to the target audience, we just need to sort out what questions we are going to ask Timmy so that we don't take too much time or blank also need to make the props for the gnomes but mime also works for the scene.
Lastly we just need to improve the transition back into the dentist scene as it is messy and confusing and we don't want to lose it right at the end, the poem at the end is good as it ties it all together as well as being fun which appeals to our young target audience and then the final position is effective as it signifies the ending making it clear we are at the end.
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